Love the story, but although it was extremely sexy and well-executed it was missing something.

The long build-up through almost half of the book would have been much more titillating if the male voices were “SMOLDERING”. I was left craving low, deep, raspy tones of demanding orders from Jack. As for Michael, soft but deep nice guy you can’t help but fall for and feel the need to corrupt. Then finally released his similar Jack-like demeanor. As for Carrie, I think she needed a bit more of a typical gypsy accent. (no offense)

All due respect to the professionals, but if the narrations were more like that I could see a new book series that would trample 50 shades.

Food for thought 😘