Really enjoyed the story over all, The negatives were only the Info updates at the end of the chapters, and the secondary story near the end. But that part may change when I hear the second book.
I liked the characters, story, and the humor. The players seemed like people you actually do meet in MMO’s.
There is just enough detail that you can fill in the descriptive details in your imagination. ( I don’t need to know that the crack in a cave wall looks like it’s a crack in a cave wall….)
I also enjoyed all the banter. (yes a lot of it is totally pointless but that’s what it’s like playing with other people in games. )
I think Jeff Hays may ne by second favorite narrator. (Won’t gush about my fav though.)
Can’t wait for the next book!