i havent finished yet but chapter 18 broke the dam.

while i enjoy the story and i keep listening…wow are there somethings about this series that make no sense.

first the convienant time skipping. given this seems to happen less in later books: it still just breaks the story. anything bad happens…next chapter an arbitrary amount of time was skipped to get back to a feel good groove.

specifically chapter 18 of this book breaks everything the last 3 books have been trying to do. the idea is essencially lets craft a magic/worldbuilding system. then just like time skips we are just going to ignore any consequences of the story and just do what ever the author wants…its just incoherant.

with all that said this is still better than most litrpg books you should read the series.