I enjoyed the book but there is a few things

I did enjoy the story and the personal part of it definitely was good but all I can say is the the fact that everybody gave up so easily, wtf
they made very bad decisions on their shots, and not just any shot life-or-death people pursuing your family you would take your time and make your ammo count.
Also they made very bad decisions on when they’re going to stay or go after they took over they’re compound and killed the mayor there could have been much better decisions than a point I understand there is a part of the story but until the end address.
to me also the narrator made all of the kids especially sound like they were whining constantly and I cannot stand whining also even when the adults we’re talking a lot of it seemed hopeless and whining people that are going to make it through the fall are going to be on their toes and not their heels the lack of weapons and ammunition disappointed me I understand that you were telling a story of a Canadian family I just wish it was more like the Mad Mick series where people actually had balls and gust how to protect their family finding guns and ammunition and doing whatever they had to do to protect their family to procure new weapons to procure new sustenance and also the fact that they had no guards or watches outside of the fence at the beginning he is a bit far-fetched thank you for your book ” I hope you do better in the future”