Narrator needs more practice staying in character for which charater is speaking.
MC is interesting, everything seems to come a bit too easy in game it seems. I’m still unsure if it’s by design or the author just lets the character breeze through a bit. There is a bit of plausibility as to why built in and I hope to see the MC having more obstacles soon.The stage is set so here’s to hoping. Kind of a YA book too.