Story was slow, the girl didn’t really grow over the series. Most of the story is this girl just pining over a guy she already has. The fight scenes and action scenes are few and far between. There are so many over used phrases like “made my way to” and “emotion caught in my throat”. The narrator needs to spend more time looking up how to pronounce words like agate, nephilim, and a few others. Her voices were inconsistent and some very big pauses in the last book. Overall both writer and narrator need to spend more time editing and refining their work. The writer needs to learn how to cut dragging scenes and kill her darlings.