The writing is good. Character development ok, could be better. Detail minimal. There is just enough of each element to convey the story with tension, suspense, and interest. However, there isn’t enough to really add texture and depth. And while we cheer for the good guys, there really isn’t enough about him, his daughter (no stories of things they did together, no memories of a birthday, Christmas shared) that the reader really doesn’t get emotionally attached. I wish there was more to the characters, more descriptions of location, people .- that there was more depth and developed.