This book would be better if there were cursing. It’s getting a bit ridiculous when the characters don’t curse When the situation calls for it. It just makes everything sound so corny. Also Justin is a fantastic narrator but in every single book he has ever done I can never take his angry ness serious. He doesn’t sound scary or intimidating. he sounds silly. especially when using words like “freaking”or”to the pits” its a joke.
The character is a charisma build and has literally no romance escapades. who cares if they are npcs, you are supposed to be e joking yourself. it’s like a kids book as a result.
some of the fighting is told instead of showed and is boring. the book was downgraded to a gamelit instead of litrpg and notifications are less….I hate it.
lastly he uses two ineffectual bs skills. sonic wave and bolt. where are the other spells is mentor said he could make? it’s boring and stupid. every other mc in these books is interesting. so far he is getting boring. first book was interesting but now I need something new. I’ll keep trying but frankly I’m getting annoyed.