This story has a lot of potential. I like the powers, fighting, deceptions, plot, and twists. But the majority of the book has a MC that sneaks around alone and over thinks most of every moment. Some parts are so boring during the dungeon dive that the MC is even falling asleep. There is just no good conversations or connections to speak of. Even the talking skull barely talks. Give this guy a friend or team or anything to get him out of his own head.