I’ve been really enjoying the story overall up until this book. The narrative and world building were coming along fine but this book just turned into some nerds wish fulfilment creep-fest.

The portion of this book dedicated to poorly written creeping of the MC on his Bebe dragon is ridiculous. I really don’t need the father-daughter bestiality development on top of the cringey and over-done sex obsession the MC has with Mrs Zerker.

I swear every second sentence is either about their shape, smell or how bad he wants to fuck them both.

Please author, just have a wank before you start writing each day for the next book okay?