it’s not as good as I originally thought

I loved it but the story was told like it was an internet fan story
and the idea of what the story was based on seems dreamy but it was not as good as I’d like to make it out to be

I wish it wasn’t how it was but some parts of it wasn’t described good I couldn’t imagine what the castle looked like (that could be my lack of castle understanding) the describing of events is not novel worthy its both not descriptive enough and hard to imagine for the parts that were lovely and let me fall in I would also call not novel worthy it would be like a really good fan made story but not novel worthy.

I believe the author has a lot of room to grow but I also believe if the author does allow themselves to grow then they will become a really good author that I will read on repeat the main reason