There’s SO MANY CHARACTERS in this story. And every character has an animal companion, so every scene has about a dozen different names in it. Nobody gets any characterization so it’s hard to keep track of what is happening to who.
These are supposedly members of Royalty, yet the actual citizenry only matters when it’s convenient to the plot, otherwise these people might as well just be random rich people. The plot jumps around nonsensically, going from the middle of one scene to the middle of another. It’s hard to keep track of what is going on.
This is mostly fantasy fulfillment of a fat kid who dreams of becoming Royalty and having their new prince husband tell off their mom for putting them on a diet.