I feel that the author really improved the storyline in this book and I really loved it, however there were some flaws that need to be addressed. number one, test continues to be childlike and immature and extremely weak. she has grown some however in comparison she seems to be a liability instead of a strong female character. I feel that the author writes his princesses like bratty princesses no matter how they strive to be in the end. number two the ending in this book was absolutely and unnecessarily too long. I feel that the ending was drawn out far beyond the necessary point in order to make a point. other than that, I feel that the overall book was strong the plot was consistent and I really enjoyed listening to this particular book.