I though over all this was a good story with potential… i would have liked better character development … some sometimes i felt it seems stilted. This could be in part to the narration. I might get the second book but hesitate because of the narration… there’s a difference in just reading the book as opposed to taking on the character as if it was yourself… it felt like it was read…. Impersonally… this is hard to explain – all the right emphasis on passages… yet it’s one of the few times a narration bothered me…