Overall the story was a good light listen.
The only critique I have about the writing of all the books in the series, is the description of the hand gestures of the characters. It popped up quite a few times and was a bit repetitive and there are better ways to describe it, instead of using descriptions like, she circled her finger in the air. Also, sometimes in dialogue between 2 characters of the same gender, it would often just say he or she said, and the narrators would also not use different voices and as a result, it was sometimes difficult to grasp which of the characters had spoken a certain line in the dialogue.
The narrators have been generally good but the accents for Liam and Elena were bad, especially the female narrator. It would have been better not doing accents at all.