So much explaining. So much telling and not showing. Are you not an author? Why the hell are you writing a How to Cultivate manual?
The first book doesn’t deserve to be lumped with these others.
Is it me or the mc getting dumber?
Forced teen drama. Just stop writing and go take a few classes.
Boring painful average 1-dimension mc. God, the 5 star reviews are a straight up lie. Should be investigated for paying for reviews.