You are just not cut out for writing. You spend way too much time explaining, telling instead of showing. God, every book except the first, begins so terribly.

The positive reviews are suspicious. Perhaps paid for. This is one of the worst and most boring cultivation series I’ve ever listened to in my life. Are you writing a How to Cultivate Manual or entertaining the readers. Learn from Cradle.

And the last one with the force cringey teen drama should’ve gotten this incompetent write cancelled haha.

Jokes aside, I’m probably dropping the series at this book.