The book overall is well done with a much lighter focus on game mechanics and stats than most litrpg books. The bad stuff is some sound effects and music completely shatter immersion and the Male reader mispronounces a few fantasy terms which is forgivable but some lines are recorded with a bad echo which just seems lazy. The only other bad thing is the main characters race in game which gets pronounced Toon which is probably a word from another language but it makes me think cartoon whenever it is read. Everything else pretty much is good. Characters seem reasonable and action seems good and the author doesn’t draw out sex sequences into an awkward and unrealistic mix of poetry and/or cringe. The book also doesn’t seem overly preachy, which seems to happen alot now a days.