First thing, love the voice acting. This particular voice actor stands out, especially in his attention to detail in dialogue.

Ultimately, it’s a fine LitRPG story. Characters develop a little, a story is told, abilities are earned. None of the story really stuck with me or pulled me in. Honestly, the best part of the story was the closing dialogue and choices (not because it was over, I genuinely mean that) but I still won’t be getting the second one.