I gave it a 4 because the 1st couple of chapters were a bit wordy… However, the rest of the story was great. It took some getting use to the Merman’s canter and speech pattern. I think the voice actor may have ahs a little trouble with that but the voice actor was great and gave the story life. It was hard to tell if this story had any connection to other stories written in the same world but I’d like to think its a but in the future from the others… Thank you foe writing this keep it up!