Spore: The Litrpg

Writing is above average for the litrpg genre.
The concept caught my attention.
Think Spore, the Mmo.

Most characters feel flat, including the MC. Plenty of levelling up, but little character growth.
Almost no tension.

would like less focus on descriptions of enemies skills, and strategy, and more dialog, relationships, and tension.

a ridiculously high proportion of the clauses in this book start with ‘I’. This paragraph for example
‘I didnt mind.. also I… I … so I hoped..I was one of the few…then I…’
/I/ think there’s too much focus on the protagonist.