A couple things I found irritating are:

1) Kevin Pierce’s ‘hispanic’ accent used for the main character was unnecessary and distracting

2) The author follows John Darby’s narrative of a secret rapture similar to the narrative found in the Left Behind Series….I’m sure this will trigger some who may read this…probably because they have not taken the time to study the issue and prefer to simply parrot what they have been told by those who parrot what they have been told.