While many LitRPG writers attempt humor, Baldwin achieves it through a humorous main character rather than by breaking the fourth wall with crude word play, juvenile poop jokes, or pop-culture references made by the narrative instead of the characters within that narrative. This makes both this and his previous novel in this series delightful listens.

The poetic ability names and large number of abilities still make it difficult to track what is happening in fights sometimes and there are still times when the music bed is a bit too loud vs. the narration track for me to hear everything without having to back up, but these are minor issues in an otherwise spectacular novel and audio production.