The story is good. There are just a few issues that im having trouble getting used to. I want him to hurry up and find something that really makes him unique. Maybe not OP but at least really unique. This doesn’t have that. He doesn’t seem too curious… or HUNGRY for it. He’s just not. Like in Cradle. Lindons hunger for power, that NEED really drove him. This guy just doesn’t seem to have it yet. The story is still interesting. Barely. Nothing is bad. Good writing. Wonderful narrator. just need something… Where is the MacGuffin?