For a 1st book it has a pretty solid plot but there are some editing issues here and there. Most can be ignored, however the over use of “what have you done!??” tends to be a tad bit irritating.
Review from Chrysalis (A Fantasy LitRPG) →
Review from Chrysalis (A Fantasy LitRPG) →
For a 1st book it has a pretty solid plot but there are some editing issues here and there. Most can be ignored, however the over use of “what have you done!??” tends to be a tad bit irritating.