12 Chapter just to get to the part that the entire book is about!? seriously!? that could have easily been 1 chapter then off to the ACTUAL story. i understand character development and the want to make you attached to characters that pass , but 12 chapters of complete nothingness and nonsense to finally get to the actual description of the book!? No… absolutely not. that is terrible writing and you are just filling a quota of words at that point. Thumbs wayyyyy down. love the premise of the story but … no no no. only reason i made it to chapter 12 was because i was curious how long it was going to take but JESUS CHRIST!!!! 12 CHAPTERS!!!