I think this is a good story that changes the usual troupes of the Dungeon core style. First, it removes the campanion of the dungeon core. So, no annoying fairy or pixie who doesn’t help the story except to say “Can’t do that” or “That’s unique, and you’re unique for doing so.” Second, the dungeon core isn’t stuck in the cave. Third, it gets dark…like Alien chestbuster dark. This could be a horror movie easily. I enjoyed my journey and want to continue it. BTW, Travis is a awesome narrator and you should check out A Snake Life which he reads.