When I first found this novel I thought it might be a tie-in into your other novel Edit do I was ok when I found out not. The plot ideas I saw were not original has I’ve seen dozens of novel used them be expect the Tonic Immobility was a treat when CoCo used it so bravo to you thinging outside the box there.
The narrator in the first few chs he sounded monotone do after the first 2 chs has plot picked up he start to give the chacthers more depth in voice do near the last 10 or so chs he start to not put the effort into the accent for different chacthers that they felt hollow and I began to lose intrested in those side chacthers if they lived or not.
IF I HAD TO SAY THIS IN ONE SENTENCE:
If you came for the Meg it ‘s abit undercooked.