Worth a read for sure. Imagine a burger where the bun and all the toppings are amazing, but the meat is just a little overdone .. you will likely eat it and enjoy it being overall good as a whole, but will also remember the meat was just a bit underwhelming.l when thinking back on it.
For me it started off great, went to ok in the middle, went under when the MC met his main goal and then slightly came back up to good at the end.
The “twist” if you will did not go over well… like a shot of tequila when you were drinking only wine. Depending on your goal, it would work for sure. You would still get a drink, but how would you feel after in that situation?