The narrator is smooth and easy to understand. Story good, people that are introduced get confusing when knowing if they are in or if they have died. That is probably my fault. I have to go back to a place in the chapter list to get back to where I left off, or think I left off. Some times I go and do tasks and then come back to the story still streaming. Thankhe only anowing thing was when a person is said to mumble the s word. I would think the s word would be spit out, or refered to in a different manner. Maybe even the c word. I have a propensity of using so call low brow wording when exposed to it. So I will not be able to continue this series. To bad. I grew up with old type guns, but I tried to get one just recently and the person said I would have to bring a extra person to the target range; so I can go for a safety certificate. He said it was to make sure I did not off my self. If that is the way a person is looked at how does any one get a gun to protect them selves. This story is close to the contavires 19 senario that is why I wanted to see what the take would be by a writer. If you are not safe with spiral thinking, tell someone that you are going to read this kind of book so they can monitor your additudes. be safe out there. sorry for the spelling mess ups.
