You couldn’t tell if Bob or Charlie were talking. Bad narrator.
Kinda fun idea for a story terrible execution. Created tons of loose ends when there were already tons in play.
Is this guys publisher not giving him enough time between books?
There seems to be a lot of convenience writing going on. Like this is a bad situation but lucky it will all turnout good. With little to no struggle.
Very predictable writing.
Very over written. Idk who you have proof reading these but if they are wearing shimmer cloaks you don’t need to state that every few seconds. Using this review on both book 3 and 4. Because I have similar thoughts.