“Snot Klap”, “no bra”, “chinas”this shows research into South Africa and I got to love it! (Local Slang)
Pity the narrator did not do a bit of research. “Groot skrik” was not recognizable and I had to rewind and listen again till I got it.

Enjoyed the book to about halfway through where the book turned into one monologue after another and I mean this literary. Self loathing being the the theme for every character. I know growth is supposed to be built into the story but monologues for everyone??? There are other techniques, try them.