I’ll admit, it took me a bit to get into this one. the structure of the story is a bit unorthodox, and got a little confusing in the beginning. but once adjusted, the story becomes a lot more interesting. this is especially true within the last half of the book when connections start to be made between characters. overall a good story, but could use a good edit to bring it all together better.
as for narration, i have to give credit, there are a lot of characters to voice, send for the most part everyone had their own that defines them. biggest complaint would be the similarities between two of the main characters names, made it confusing as who was being spoken about. but overall a good job.