Pretty good story. But many inconsistencies.

I liked the story overall and likely would rate a 4 without the inconsistencies I noticed. There were a few but one that was obvious was earlier in the book he talks about how if a player in game didn’t eat after 4 hours they would start to get hungry, but you could log out and back in to reset. Later on though this in game food eating was completely different and was worried about dying on a remote planet from lack of food… I am like why not just log out to reset? But apparently the rule changed. The narrator annunciated well and I liked many voices, but I eventually got too annoyed with the loud swallowing and other noises that kept getting through to the reading.