Generally this was a solid story with a good amount of meat to keep a person interested. It had some good twists but some were just obvious. I felt some parts could have been condensed with a good editor. I also felt that especially with the males in the story, some parts felt unrealistic, like the author was just guessing how a boy would react. As a gay man who went through something similar the intimate scenes felt lacking and unrealistic as well. The author got many sports references and some of the car references wrong as well. As I said, all things a good editor should have caught. The ideas and story were very good and well worth the read. I hope this author continues to write as I want to see what they come up with next.