Narrator is FANTASTIC and the idea for the magic system and main story line are unique and interesting. the secondary characters are hilarious and well written.
The Main Character however is a TOOL BAG!
I dont like him. I did in the 1st and 2nd book but half way through the 3rd and this one I’ve grown to hate him. The sexual frustration and insecurity is grating. I want to punch him.
I can tell what the auther is trying to portray however there isnt any substance to back it. he thinks he is a horrible person bc of his decisions however there isnt any decisions that would lead anyone to that conclusion. if anything he’d be labeled that bc of his LACK of decisions and his lying. or the fact that he completely ignores his God/father and the system lady who know WAY MORE than him. for no reason ether. his lack of love life is ridiculous and makes little sense. hiding behind a new relationship with a girl on another plain of existence for ignoring the advances of his dedicated companions. he was avoiding sex LONG before his “girlfriend”
one person, a computer generated person, dies and now he is self deprecating and borderline EMO. he lost his confidence that made him likable.
The only reason I got the 4th book is bc the other characters are awesome and the story behind the war and the gods have me hooked. LEE is a dipstick!
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