What would have made That Which Should Not Be better?
If it had been written by someone smarter.
What could Brett J. Talley have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?
Not written it, or left his christianity out of his desire to write a mythos story.
What aspect of David Stifel’s performance would you have changed?
The performance was good actually, just in service of a pointless narrative.
What character would you cut from That Which Should Not Be?
The christian god.
Any additional comments?
If you don’t understand HPL and you are a big believer in the bible, please don’t try to write mythos stories.