The story could have been a good one, all the sex was uncomfortable to listen to. If the author described more in detail in the beginning how the lead male was feeling or thinking maybe it would have been more realistic. Somethings that should have been detailed where not, while things that didn’t matter where in detail. It also made me mad how the female didn’t fight more for herself. I probably could have connected with her if she had a little fight. I tried to keep listening because the store itself seemed really good but couldn’t get past the weird sex parts.