Fantastic ride. A couple of editing things, like “All intensive purposes,” as stated by Boulder, but other than that, I loved the story. It’s very clear the author played Final Fantasy IV (FF2 in the U.S.), as everything about this Dragoon, to include his “Jump” skill, is taken from the character Kain.
I’ve been on a LitRPG binge lately, and this story is one of my favorites so far. A top 3 for me.